Comments are on purple, things which are bad/wrong are on red.
Overall this app was really, really weak. You should take a look at accepted applications to look for good examples of long and detailed applications. Of course, don't copy them since that will lead to your application getting denied. I haven't been really active lately, so I can't judge how active you are in the community, I leave that to others. But I do not think you should be a staff member considering your really young age.
I am on -1. Good luck with the future.
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