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Best Posts in Thread: Helper Application from CasualMow

  1. Muunkee

    Muunkee Legendary art supply hoarder

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    Stop it
    Stop it
    Filler
    Stop it
    No.

    ^ based on the above quotes feom your same app, this is not true.


    Work on yourself and make a good application before applying.

    Pm me if you want help on writing an app. Its night and day.

    Also. No. Improvement. Do. Not. Apply. If. You. Are. Not. Going. To. Change.


    You are dedicated enough and remind me of myself. Breathe, honey, and put forth effort.
     
    Last edited: Oct 2, 2017
    Muunkee, Oct 2, 2017
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  2. EllieEllie

    EllieEllie ♥ Staff Member Leadership

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    I'm seconding everything said here. Your introduction and why you should be helper section put together are as long as your weakness section.

    If this application is unsuccessful and you decide to apply again further down the line, I suggest compiling all of your hobbies, all of your experience, personality traits and things that make you unique in a bullet pointed list and then constructing an application from that. This way, you will have things to base sections off and you'll really be able to explore each of your personal attributes that you think will make you desirable to the staff team. For one, you are definitely determined and I never see you give up on something when you put your mind to it. I know this because I've seen how you are with applications, with your builds and your music. I don't see you talk about this in your application though and other people may not know you as well. You need to give a thorough explanation on why you think you can be a good addition to the team, not just stating what you'd like to do and including little information. I think your determination would definitely help, so I'm just sad you've not fully sold yourself here.

    I'm really glad you want the server to gain more players and you're ready to welcome the new ones, but the way you have worded this is basically saying "I want to be Helper so I can help people". Anyone can do that already without a tag. You need to explain why being a Helper would enable you to go the extra mile for those players and where you hope your ambitions will take you with it. Do you want to be a Helper so you can start your journey in the staff team and help make decisions and improvements so the server can be the best it can be? Or do you just want to be there to say hello? (Not that that is a bad thing, but I'm not going to +1 someone who I think will just be another body with no substance)

    You can also take action on this without a tag, if you notice this happening then make a player report about said people. I know it isn't immediate action, but everything you've mentioned, you can do as a regular player.

    Last point, your grammar is honestly atrocious. I suggest getting someone to edit your applications or putting it into a word document and paying attention to the red squiggles.

    Please take up @Similaristic on his offer to help you out if you do decide to apply again, should this be unsuccessful.



    That's 21k in taxes a day, are you craycray??
     
    EllieEllie, Oct 3, 2017
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  3. OKNEM

    OKNEM Celebrity Meeper

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    Hey mow! I can really see that you're trying your best with this, but unfortunately it's not enough. My edits are in red.
    Overall, I can see the effort, and I can see you've taken people's feedback. However, I don't think it's descriptive enough in places. You need to persuade us as to why we should accept you onto the staff team.

    I'm more than happy to help you out on your next application, and helping you improve your weaknesses. Please don't hesitate to message me in game if you want to hang out or if you need some tips on your app. I'd be glad to. Good luck in the future!
     
    OKNEM, Oct 3, 2017
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  4. SpongeyStar

    SpongeyStar Professor in Wumbology

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    that's cool lol


    don't put this in, we get it


    Mow you are very active and dedicated however I see a few letdowns. You are extremelyyyyyy immature and I'm surprised you didn't put this as your weakness. When I've been doing the build for you as well, on countless number of times I've told you 'I have school, I can't come on' but then it's like you are ignoring me and you are still constantly nagging me to do the build. I enjoy doing this build and I see a lot coming from it in the future but you need to gain maturity and respect what other people say.

    In the past you've also been rude in chat and put 'xD's' after it. Not a mature thing to do, if you want to be a staff member. I also don't see you helping much in chat (more xD's lol.) :D

    As much as you are active and dedicated it's a -1 from me but good luck buddy. :)
     
    SpongeyStar, Oct 2, 2017
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