Helper Application from CasualMow

I'm seconding everything said here. Your introduction and why you should be helper section put together are as long as your weakness section.

If this application is unsuccessful and you decide to apply again further down the line, I suggest compiling all of your hobbies, all of your experience, personality traits and things that make you unique in a bullet pointed list and then constructing an application from that. This way, you will have things to base sections off and you'll really be able to explore each of your personal attributes that you think will make you desirable to the staff team. For one, you are definitely determined and I never see you give up on something when you put your mind to it. I know this because I've seen how you are with applications, with your builds and your music. I don't see you talk about this in your application though and other people may not know you as well. You need to give a thorough explanation on why you think you can be a good addition to the team, not just stating what you'd like to do and including little information. I think your determination would definitely help, so I'm just sad you've not fully sold yourself here.

I'm really glad you want the server to gain more players and you're ready to welcome the new ones, but the way you have worded this is basically saying "I want to be Helper so I can help people". Anyone can do that already without a tag. You need to explain why being a Helper would enable you to go the extra mile for those players and where you hope your ambitions will take you with it. Do you want to be a Helper so you can start your journey in the staff team and help make decisions and improvements so the server can be the best it can be? Or do you just want to be there to say hello? (Not that that is a bad thing, but I'm not going to +1 someone who I think will just be another body with no substance)

You can also take action on this without a tag, if you notice this happening then make a player report about said people. I know it isn't immediate action, but everything you've mentioned, you can do as a regular player.

Last point, your grammar is honestly atrocious. I suggest getting someone to edit your applications or putting it into a word document and paying attention to the red squiggles.

Please take up @Similaristic on his offer to help you out if you do decide to apply again, should this be unsuccessful.

That's 21k in taxes a day, are you craycray??

 

These are not actions that make one fit to be a staff member. Denied.