I don't know were this trend of extremely short applications that tell us nothing has come from. Check out any of the accepted apps and they will clearly show that for this size of application to be okay you have to have had an extremely valuable asset and even then people would harshly criticize them for the size of their app. Applications the size of books used to be very common.
Anyways focusing on you
Your intro tells me nothing about who you are as a person. It is the very minimum of what an intro should be.
Your why section is weak in support of you being staff. You know most things about the server but so does most everyone. Saying no one dislikes you isn't really a strength. Everyone has someone who doesn't like them and to me it's more impressive to be able to work through that maturely. If you apply again pick at least 5 strengths and explain why they would be good for a helper to have and any examples of you using them to overcome issues.
Your weakness section is weak. I can't believe you only have that weakness but let's say you do. Saying it is a minor woory sounds like you are blowing it off. How exactly do you plan to overcome it? What examples do you have?
Having references is supposed to be optional but it's turned into a requirement. Find some people you've worked with and ask them if they will be a reference.
Most of your conclusion section could be split between intro and why.
I see you lurking on forums a bit which is great! But try to get more involved.
Your app might have also benefited from discussing any bans you may have had.
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