Yo también soy mexicano.
Alright, Dan, I've checked out your application from start to finish. Just to start off:
Introduction: I'm Dannerzz, or to older meep players "TheVap" (wtf nickname is that?)
~ @Dannerzz
I play guitar and violin and when im really bored and have nothing else to do I get on Meep (which is actually very often).
~ @Dannerzz
(Btw) I love to debate and talk about history
~ @Dannerzz
Refrain from making comments and acronyms via parenthesis when writing an application. To keep it professional and clean. And, to add on, I'd proofread your application before submitting to check for mistakes, such as spelling "I'm" as "im" or the repetition of "meep" as a nickname for the server.
And before I forget, keep the replies to comments at a minimum. Constantly replying back to someone on an application doesn't really make you look that fit for a future staff member.
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The introduction has more information that your "Why should you be helper?" section. This isn't necessarily looked down upon, but something to keep note. Keep in mind that the most writing done in a Staff Application is the "Why?" section. Introduction can be lengthy, but it is preferred to have as much information explaining why you should be a staff member. Take Courtney's application for an example or something to look at when applying for the future (if you plan to do so):
Helper Application from Courtneyyy
What are your weaknesses? Being busy on some days. I love debates.
~ @Dannerzz
I know there's more to this than just "I'm busy on some days" and "I love debates". Yes, those two are considered weaknesses when you typed this application, but add the negative traits to your own personality. I'll put myself as an example: I'm usually an emotional and stressed person. I have occasional mood swings and I have a tendency to overthink things. Right there, I listed about four weaknesses I have if I wrote an application.
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Now, to summarize your reasoning as to why you should be helper:
It doesn't convince me.
Wanting to get to know people is easy for some, difficult for others. But striking up friendly conversations and chatting with people while on the server doesn't require a Helper application to do so. There's other reasons, such as saying your activity helps cover for some parts of the day where there's barely any staff online. Take a look at the "Accepted" folder of applications and read through their "Why should you be helper?" sections. Some break down the reasoning into bits, explaining how they can do this and that, etc.
Another problem that butts heads with why it doesn't convince me is the way you responded to people's comments on the application:
-1 hell no. You always say the N-Word in the past times we talked in /msg
~ @Zesk
I did say i know when to be "professional" and when not to. Also, that's the way I was raised, being a hispanic... it's really a thing we say alot to eachother, doesn't mean this is how i act to customers or co workers.
~ @Dannerzz
Most people leave the comments be. They are meant to be criticism, although some tend to think differently on what "constructive" means. But you replied to Zesk three times in separate posts. That, alone, in my book, doesn't make you look good.
So, my current vote as of now is -1. I wish you the best of luck on your application.
