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Helper Application from Adstar76

Discussion in 'Denied' started by Adstar76, Jan 22, 2016.

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  1. Adstar76

    Adstar76 Meeper

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    Member Name Adstar76

    Additional In Game Names: Adstar76, Ismaxu, Jefftheduck

    How old are you? 13

    Location: Australia

    Do you have TeamSpeak? Yes

    How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekdays) 3 hours

    How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekends) 4 hours

    Have you ever been staff on this or any other server? Yes

    References: Please give IGN's I don't remember the players name. I was staff on a server a long time ago then resigned.

    When did you join Meepcraft? Janurary 2015 I dont know if this is right.

    Introduction: Hi my name is Adam im 13 years old. I like playing minecraft and lots of other games. I am a nice and friendly person that will help everyone. I will never do anything wrong and I am very responsible. I play meep a lot and its my favourite server!

    Why should you be Helper? I should be helper because I am very kind, I will never disobey anyone, I am very respectful, I am a great person that can help everyone that needs help. I will be really active in game and on the forums. I am always active in game and on the forums. I love meep craft its my favourite server. I will help everyone in any game eg: halo towns and lots more. I will report to higher staff if other staff are abusing the powers. I will not abuse my powers as a staff member. I will respect staff below me and higher then me. I will always be looking out for any Mean users in game or on the forums and deal with them. I will always keep my out for people that need help. This is why I should ne helper thank you :)

    What are your weaknesses? When I go on holidays I wont have my computer there for I wont be able to play so I might not be on for like 2 weeks max.

    Please give any other information you might think is useful for us to know: I'm 13 turning 14 :)
     
  2. adlovesdogs

    adlovesdogs ex-staff <3

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    Hey there! So I am going to be a -1 because your app should have more detail. Specifically weaknesses. I also think you should improve activity on forums and become a little more well-known. I think you have potential in the future.

    -1, good luck!
     
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  3. Adstar76

    Adstar76 Meeper

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    Thank you for the support I didn't really know what to put. I tried my hardest though :)
     
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  4. Toostenheimer

    Toostenheimer Legendary Meeper

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    I read through this application in under a minute. This was below average for a 13-year-old and looks very weak just from looking at it.

    The references are players who know you very well and can give you positive votes (possibly negative, haven't seen any though). It isn't asking for the player's name on the server you were staff on.

    The one thing that makes me frown at this is that you include:
    And:
    Too cheesy. Put something else in other than "I love Meepcraft" or "It's my favorite server!". Tell us what your hobbies are, what grade you're in, etc.

    Again, you put the most overused phrases in your application, such as:
    And this made me cringe while reading:
    Don't ever put this in the middle of your application. Put it in the Extra Info section:
    There's more than just this weakness. Include other weaknesses that you KNOW you have, like... Immaturity, Anger, Personal Issues, School, etc.
    Overall, this application was weak and full of cliches. -1
     
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  5. Muunkee

    Muunkee Legendary art supply hoarder

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    I'm not gonna go through your app cause masteroftoast did it for me. Wewt. But I will say you should try and include more detail (it doesn't have to be 10 paragraphs long but it does need a bit more than you have).

    Try working on your activity. You seem nice enough but activity and maturity are a must. Spend a good solid couple months working on those. You just now started being active. You need a bit more time I think.

    You have more weaknesses than that. Be honest to us.

    Overall not currently ready, try again in 2 months or so though with a more improved maturity and application.
     
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  6. junelawnchaired

    junelawnchaired neat-o!

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    Hey there, we believe you need to work on your activity, become more experienced with the server and become more acquainted with the community. This application is denied, please work on those things then re-apply no sooner than two weeks from today :)
     
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