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Media Application from Spiderjel

Discussion in 'Denied' started by Spiderjel, Mar 18, 2018.

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  1. IzzSt

    IzzSt Celebrity Meeper

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    1. use ReplayMod for server showcases,
    2. what recorder do you use, I use OBS
     
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  2. MasterTurtle

    MasterTurtle Popular Meeper

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    Sorry man but -1. First are using the cinematic options. Second you need to turn your FOV (I think it is) down.
     
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  3. Spiderjel

    Spiderjel Popular Meeper

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    Hey, Kling I probably shouldn't be asking for more time but can I get until this coming Monday? Msg me mail me or reply to this please if I can get an extension.
     
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  4. Bloopers

    Bloopers Legendary Meeper

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    i'm not going to judge you on maturity or anything because i don't play so i don't know you. but i will point out some things that most people haven't in this application: the videos

    first of all, based on the date that those two video were uploaded... you really rushed them? were you excited to apply or something so you rushed to get it ready as soon as possible? the videos were both uploaded on the same day, and i'm going to take a guess but i doubt that you spent more than a day on each of them either...

    let's talk about the first video. there is one major issue that is there for the whole thing. that would be the camera. it's moving. constantly. like, way too much. there is pretty much never a moment where the camera isn't moving. the video should be showing off the spawn, but you can't see it because of the camera moving so much.
    your choices of where to record were also quite bad. there was like, 6 or 7 whole seconds where you were just showing some waterfall on the mountains of the spawn. (while the camera was moving up and down as well)
    another thing with your first video is that the music doesn't sync up with anything. you recorded some shots of spawn and then put them together in an editor and then slapped some song on it. it's not a bad song, but you could've done your jump cuts to sync up with the music. for example a buildup to a beat drop or something - show some shots from a high point while moving very slowly, and then suddenly the beat drops and you're showing off some epic action in the terrarium or mob arena.

    tl;dr camera moving too much, bad choices of places to show off, music not synced to video at all

    now, the second video is pretty much the same thing. camera moves too much, music was just tossed in there. but there is one difference. it's supposed to be about halo, not the halo spawn(i think?) - remove the video title. what is the video about now? i would guess that it's just showing off some build for a server spawn. the only reason i know it's halo is because you said so in the title. where is the actual halo gameplay? ask for permission to have spectator mode/fly enabled from an admin and have some people get in a game and show off the gameplay. show off the shooting and the fighting and the action !!!
    also the music isn't the same length as the video so it cuts off. i see you tried to make it fade but it's really obvious because it's right in the middle of a buildup to some kind of drop that it cuts off.

    ALSO, in the halo video there is some weird field of view warping going on the middle of the screen while the camera is moving(so, almost all the time)

    i hope you can take this wall of text and use it to improve your videos! good luck, but it's a -1 from me

    EDIT1: i saw someone mention the replay mod. absolutely do that if you can't get fly permissions from an admin. excellent mod for recording
    EDIT2: also your intro is a bit obnoxious. to be honest, just remove it. it's just ur name bouncing around the screen for a few seconds with some music.
    EDIT3: i agree you need more time than 5 days thats not enough time. give this man more time!
     
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  5. iiTzJDL

    iiTzJDL Legendary Meeper

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    lolno

    not interested in having someone like you given access to this rank.

    -1
     
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  6. Bloopers

    Bloopers Legendary Meeper

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    i had absolutely 0 videos on meepcraft and i was accepted. i don't think that's the worry, as long as he can prove that he can make good quality videos i think it's totally fine.
    (also i agree the videos being posted on the same day, which is the day of the application makes it seem like he was in a bit of a rush)

    this is a glitch, it happened to me too when i first applied. freaked me out and thought i applied for the wrong thing so i deleted it and had to re write the whole thing 'cuz i was dumb and didn't save it anywhere.

    i'd give him atleast a week, 5 days isn't enough imo
     
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  7. Kling

    Kling Break blocks not hearts

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    Sure you have until the weekend is over, we are in a dire need of media members.
     
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  8. Spiderjel

    Spiderjel Popular Meeper

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    Here you go! :D
     
  9. Marshy_88

    Marshy_88 Celebrity Meeper

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    OH DEAR GOD.

    ITS PLOTS NOT PLOT(')S


    WHY
     
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  10. Muunkee

    Muunkee Legendary art supply hoarder

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    You know theres an button which smooths your camera so it doesnt look awful
    Its just nno good
     
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  11. SpongeyStar

    SpongeyStar Professor in Wumbology

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    your halo video made me feel super dizzy please change that

    also your description for your two videos? 'this is for my application' really?? you should be genuinly making these videos, not just for an app. I know meep is in despo need for media members but someone who is patient and genuinly does things is better

    your video style is ok, but try not going so quickly.

    I also don't know if you are staff capable, aka your maturity may be an issue.
     
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  12. alex77034

    alex77034 Hey baby, I hear the blues a-callin'

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    In my opinion, the video wasn’t awful, but there’s an option in minecraft to make it cinematic so that when you’re moving it’s less choppy and more clean.
     
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  13. MasterTurtle

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    Yeah the cinematic mode
     
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  14. lollisweet101

    lollisweet101 Celebrity Meeper

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    In addition to everyone else's feedback, you only said Achmed's name. Who owns the other plots? You need to give credit to them too.

    Not to mention that you went from #1-#5 when you should do 5-1 to keep the viewers intrigued instead of just revealing the #1 plot right away.

    As well as your video intro being a bit disorienting and lengthy. Please shorten it so we can watch the video without having 10 seconds of flashing and spinning letters.
     
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  15. iPolarFlame

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    Your creative video is a bit frame-laggy and choppy. I recommend cinematic camera (f4) and using a mod such as replay mod for better cinematics. You had some cool transition, but it was hard to see the plots very clearly and you did not give the names of the plots other than achmed's.
     
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    Lt_Sponge Popular Meeper

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    You were extremly toxic to me also you where disrespectful to alot of people on the server including fuzzlr, as a media you could be useful, but i'm not sure that meepcraft wants a person like you -1 if you want you can ask KyloMeep he will verify this information
    --- Double Post Merged, Mar 25, 2018, Original Post Date: Mar 25, 2018 ---
    If you want i've got more screenshots for you, #KlutchDecals or #Cooleysworld please think wisely if you need nick in the staff team
     
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    Adam34falcon Celebrity Meeper

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    He's right he does need to be put in his place.
    -1
     
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  18. Kling

    Kling Break blocks not hearts

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    Looked past the childish remarks you made to me but the above is horrendous, media members still represent the server and your production quality is not worth the risk.
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    Videos for reference:

     
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