Oakhollow

if u need a alpha town then look no further oakhollow is ur town we have a event center modern homes a few mansion and a shopping mall so if u need a town then type /t join oakhollow today and we are also looking for town assistants if u want to apply mail mrnukeluke in game

 

Not professional, if you want the best possible chance of good results, be professional.

 

Also use capitals, grammar, and don't have run on sentences. If you want it to look professional, spend more time on it so people will think that you also spend more time on them and your town. Also, you may want to work on how you tell someone to do something (etc. "build me a mansion) and leave the game. This makes me frustrated every time I work with you as I don't have the details, and I don't have the access, and most importantly, I don't have the money. Set "u, ur, and r" as short cuts in your devices settings so it automatically changes it to the proper form.

Sorry, that was a rage bubble about you I kept in too long.

 

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