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First attempt at a Modern House

Discussion in 'Architecture' started by shiroppy, Apr 4, 2016.

  1. shiroppy

    shiroppy Celebrity Meeper

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    Well the title explains it some but like well I built this and I need some CRITICAL feedback. I want to know what I need to fix in the future and what should stay. Here's some photos :]

    Link: http://imgur.com/a/NLxGa



    Thank you for commenting! -QueenTiitan
     
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  2. Marshy_88

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    A nice first try, but its a bit bland. My eye just looks at the center and glares over. Try adding landscape, grass, a fence maybe
     
  3. Jake17689

    Jake17689 Well-Known Meeper

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    Very nice. but the interior is not modern. Maybe google some interior decorating and give it a try. As for the outside, it's looking great. Try to add some more color, a fountain always looks nice too. All around, great job! :)
     
  4. MiniArch_

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    Very cute, interesting colors :) gj! Tbh, I hate modern so thumbs up to you for giving it a try;p
     
  5. Lord_Walrus

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    That resource pack hurts my eyes.
     
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  6. xXAdotXx

    xXAdotXx Bibliophile Extraordinaire

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    It's good for a first attempt! I got a couple things I think could help for next time:

    - Add some more depth to the outside of the house. Continue some stone slabs around the back and sides, maybe even incorporate another block! It just keeps the entire house interesting that way.
    - Laaaandscaping! This always helps to add some colour into the build and since you've stuck to a couple colours, adding some green and different pops of colours will brighten it up and keep it interesting.

    Couple of things on the interior as well:

    - Keep the edges sharp. In a couple of spots I noticed you had like a block missing in some places. Keep the walls smooth and consistent, it helps to enhance that sleek modern look you're going for. Also continue the pink down for the entire wall, unless you're going for a wainscot kind of look.
    - Change up the flooring! There's already lots of grey stone and once you get too much of it, it starts to look bland. Add some wood in there, I'd go for a dark oak or spruce, because it adds some good contrast against the pink.
    - Maybe split it up into some rooms. You've got high ceilings as well and I think that some sort of loft would add for some more floorspace as well as give it an edgy twist.

    That's all I got! For a first it looks really good. Nice work!
     
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