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Helper Application from XxKxDogxX

Discussion in 'Denied' started by XxKxDogxX, Oct 19, 2016.

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  1. XxKxDogxX

    XxKxDogxX Popular Meeper

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    Member Name XxKxDogxX

    Additional In Game Names: The_Gamer_Chick

    How old are you? 20

    Location: USA

    Do you have TeamSpeak? Yes

    How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekdays) 4 hours

    How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekends) 6 hours

    Have you ever been staff on this or any other server? No

    References: Please give IGN's N/A

    When did you join Meepcraft? 4 years ago but I finally made a account 2 years ago

    Introduction: I'm a nice and kind person to talk to. I'm very helpful and I'm a hard worker, when I set my mind to it, I get the job done.

    Why should you be Helper? I know my way around meepcraft, I have stuck here for 4 years, and I want to help everyone that needs help and get comfortable with the server. I want to stay and help the server grow.

    What are your weaknesses? Attempting to please everyone.
    I work to hard.
    My weakness is trying to help everyone and make sure everyone is happy, even if they aren't. I do work way to hard when I have a job, I am fixing that by making myself have more patience's.


    Please give any other information you might think is useful for us to know: I am trustworthy and honest. I was born and rise to be kind and always tell the truth and to help others.
     
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  2. Muunkee

    Muunkee Legendary art supply hoarder

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    This is nice, but I would really like to see more. Helpme get to know you! people are more comfortable being helped around someone they know a little more. I'm not saying reveal personal info, but little things add up :3 tell us about pets, hobbies, school activities, that's always fun.

    I'm glad you enjoy the server! But there's a bit of an issue with you becoming staff - I have never seen you before! Talk in shout, use forums a lot, get on teamspeak. The easiest and quickest ways for people to start learning your name is via forums and TS. Try to help people out in global by answering questions and just general conversation. As I said before, people are more comfortable around someone they know.

    This section is by far the most important part of your app. Convince me! Why should you be helper? What are your good qualities? How are you better than the average applicant? Are you up to actual working to the server over your own personal playtime?
    None of these are weaknesses! You'd actually have better luck putting these in your 'why' section. These are good qualities, not bad.
    When we ask for weaknesses, we are looking for qualities about you that would prevent you from helping us. Things like immaturity, impatience, or being quick to anger are a few examples. It's also good to list how you are trying to work on or prevent said weaknesses from affecting you.
    Again! These types of good qualities should go in the 'why.'

    Overall the app seemed to lack info, or it was in the wrong place. I heavily heavily suggest spending way more time on your app as well as looking over accepted apps for examples.
    The fact that you deleted your past apps shows me lack of real dedication and you changed some info around and that is considered editing your application. That's frowned upon, really.
    I suggest you take time, make friends, chat around, and all in all just get a little more known in the community. This will take time! Some people more than others, 1-2 months is the usual minimum.
    You can contact me if you want more tips or want help writing a future app! For now I think its best you wait and try again later.
     
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  3. Imperfectly

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    You looked @ the wrong place and quoted the wrong line, She/He has teamspeak.

    You make it sound like you've wanted to quit but can't when you say "I have stuck here for 4years"

    -1 for me, Read muunkees reply, Should cover pre much everything, Goodluck!
     
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    This is great however I would love to know a bit more about you, how long you have been playing minecraft, what else you enjoy doing in your spare time and stuff like that.

    It's great you want to help the server out however it would be even better if you could expand on this and add points as to why you love the server not just I have stuck here for 4 years.

    I'm not sure it is necessary to put working to hard as a weakness and it should have been in why should you be helper.

    Overall I haven't known you in game due to time zones I assume.
    From what I have read here I see little effort has been put into your app however you seem like a great person.
    I don't think you're ready to become a staff member at this point of time but keep up the good work.
     
  5. Marshy_88

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    Based on several things, which include Grammar, effort, and spelling, I don't believe you're 20. Otherwise, this application is way undersized, the lack of references shows that you haven't interacted much with the community, and if you are to apply again, please look at other applications, and treat this as an essay, not a first day of school "Who Are You" sheet.

    Location is asked so we know about time zones, just "USA" is way too broad. I believe there are 5 time zones in the US? (Don't quote me on that, I'm Canadian and have only 5 years of US knowledge)
     
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    this is your third helper app, you gotta stop deleting them, im still a -1
     
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  7. Toostenheimer

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    So,

    These aren't considered weaknesses. A better place for this is the "Why?" section of the application.

    Again, this isn't a weakness. This is more of a goal for yourself.
    This tells me nothing about you. What do you do in your free time? What other games do you play? Do you have a job (from your age)?

    I've been here just as long as you have, and I have never seen you around the server. Either you're silent like a mouse every day, or this is your first time here.
    Rose*

    May want to overlook your application for any grammar mistakes before submitting.

    From what I've found, my vote is at a -1. Work on your grammar and give more info about yourself. Try to socialize with other players on the server, too. If you are a very social person, you will do very well as a helper.

    Good luck!
     
  8. Adrian

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    Hey doge,

    So this app is really short plus i have never seen you in game plus I think you need more experience. This is gonna have to be a -1
     
  9. Midnight_Galaxy

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    Heya, so for me this application is extremely weak, I do not believe you have put in enough detail in most areas. Here are some hints and tips on how I believe you can make your application better.

    So this section is extremely weak, what we want here is for you to tell us about yourself, what are your hobbies? What do you do in your free time? How did you find meep? Why do you play meep? All of these questions are some things you could answer in DETAIL in the introduction section.


    Okay, this section needs to have the most detail in your entire application. Try answering here who, what, where, when, why and how. After answering this you can then go in with subheadings, Experience, Work Ethic, Strengths Etc. Do not be afraid to put in detail!


    So for me this is currently a -1 however I believe if you take the time, put more effort in and work on this application it might change. I also haven't seen you in game so possibly try working on activity but that could just be timezones. Good Luck!

    Happy Helping :D


     
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    -1
    short/lacking app
    not much info
    READ MUUNKEES REPLY @Muunkee
     
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    @Muunkee nailed the basis off of what i was goin to say. I dont believe this application shows youre 20. Act like this is a job app. Try your hardest. Also i know you havent, but dont edit, you cant edit after you turned in a job application :).
    -1 for now, good day :)
    -Dawn
     
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    Now, this is my first post in a while on the forums. I haven't seen you in game so I would have no idea if you are mature or not. I don't believe that you're 20 because of the size of your application. Sorry, -1 from me.
     
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    Hey there!
    Here's what I have to say

    - I have seen you in game quite a bit. You're really positive!
    - I think your weaknesses need to be rephrased (and spell checked too!)
    You say you work too hard but what you mean is that you have trouble balancing meep work from real life
    Trying to please everyone, is not a weakness but letting people go without bans or giving in when someone pressures you to do something is a weakness.

    Take a look at some of the previously accepted applications and see their length and quality and try to match that!

    There is always room for improvement! Good luck.
     
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    Hey so if you decide to apply again click in here for some good examples.
    look at how much detail and length is put into them.
     
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    who are you?
     
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    Applications are my favorite thing to read but here I feel I'm not reading anything, I think you could be a good helper just like everyone is capable of being as long as you really want it, I would like to see you try harder and if you really have been on for 4 years or even 2 years you have been through many different things on here so goodluck and best wishes my votes -0.5
     
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    -1 I've never seen you, weak app, and you lied about your time on meep, you did not join in 2012.
     
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    I don't like to be one that doesn't explain but I don't have time to complain. Muunkee and all the other posts pretty much wrap up what I was going to say. One thing though, you put 'to' instead of 'too' and that kind of makes me doubt you're twenty years old. Okay enjoy Meepcraft now :)
    -1
     
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    -1... What
     
  20. Muunkee

    Muunkee Legendary art supply hoarder

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    As of right now, this application is denied. This is due to a couple of things, mainly your lack of effort put forth. Show us that you can make a better app and get yourself out there more in game! See what people have said about you on your app and to you on PMs and really work on it and try to improve. :)
    Have a nice day.
     
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