Stone's Helper Application

IGN: Stone_Hawkeye
Skype Username: I have one but I want to keep it private unless I'm accepted for an interview
Teamspeak Username: Stone_Hawkeye
Mic Use: Yes I do have a mic
Age:13
Timezone: Central
Hours online per weekday: 2-4
Hours online per weekend: 4-12 each weekend day
Position Change: Elite to Helper

Introduction:
Merry Christmas everyone! I'm Stone_Hawkeye but most people call me Stone! I love to play sports such as Hockey, Cross Country, Track, and more! I have been playing Meepcraft sense June of 2012 so I have been around for about a year and a half, I guess I'm considered and "oldie". I am applying because for a long time this has been my only and favorite sever to play on and hang out with the great community!

Why I should be Helper?
I would be a great Helper for the following reasons. I have been playing Meepcraft for about a year and a half so I am very familiar with the commands and rules. I am very active on forums and in-game I am online for at least 2 hours every day. I have gotten to know most of you by talking to you in-game or on the forums so I am very familiar with the community. I am used to getting asked a lot of questions about commands and rules because I have owned many towns and have been assistant of a couple of towns. I am very mature for my age. I am a strait A-B student that always gets my homework done on time and does a lot of academic activities. I am always looking to help people, if its with their homework, if its in-game, or if its anywhere, then so be it, I will always try to help. As a staff member I would try to help get modreqs done faster because sometimes it takes a minute to a couple of hours to get a staff member to answer a modreq. I also would be helping a lot of people in the Towny world with commands and rules because that's what I specialize in

Weaknesses:
I am not very active on Teamspeak, but I am trying to go on it more when I have the time. Also I am not very well-known in the community so I am trying to /shout more and I'm trying to become as well-known in the community as I possibly can. At times I can be very stubborn but that's only because I am following my gut and doing what I think is right even though it might not be. Sometimes I may not be able to come on for the day due to Hockey practice and school homework.

Conclusion:
I think I would make a great staff member and I hope you do too! There are some weakness that I need to work on but we all are humans and we all make mistakes. So when you see me in-game or on forums don't be afraid to ask me questions, I am always willing to help! Thanks for taking some time out of your day to read my staff application. I hope you like it! Sorry if it's a little short. Thanks!

-Stone_Hawkeye (Mr. Pebble)

 

-1. I have seen very little improvement in the areas mentioned on your last application, not to mention that this application is literally your old one with a few extra additions. I disapprove of laziness, which is what this is.

Along with that, i'll just repost what I said on your past application.

- I have seen you in game quite often, but I don't see you help very often. However, I have seen you, which is good, and I have seen you help, which is even better.

- Your forums activity isn't all that great. While you do post, your activity is rather sporadic. You post 10 times one day and then don't post for 3 days. Try to work on that, as well as how constructive your posts are. While you do sometimes post in the places I count, which are Q&A, Report a Bug, Suggestions, and Staff Recruitment, and your posts are constructive more often than not, you don't do it as often as I'd like. Try to work on it.

- Your introduction was alright, but I wish you had focused a lot less on Meepcraft and more on you as a person. Anything about Meepcraft can be easily tied into your Why section; save the Intro for your personal info, like your personality traits and likes/dislikes. We want to get to know you.

- Your Why is extremely short and is more of a list. Try to have a paragraph with at least 5-8 sentences for each of your points, and have at least 4 or 5 points. Elaborate on how you demonstrate each point and explain how they relate you working as a Helper.

- Your weaknesses are also like a list. Tell us how each weakness effects your work as a Helper and how you are currently working to prevent them.

For those reviewing after me, here's a link to his other application:

http://meepcraft.com/threads/stone_hawkeyes-helper-application.10695/

 

Ok sorry thanks for the feedback!

 

-1
Basically for all the reasons Chaos said...
But I'll still do a list.
*Even though you have a decent amount of posts, the thread you post on are irrelevant and unimportant.
*Your application has improved very little.
*This is mostly preference, but there was no need to increase your text size.
*I found some grammar errors.

 

Thanks for the feed back!

 

I see you online now and again and on forums sometimes, but not really helping out players. Also your application doesn't really show why you specifically should be staff because i know half the people on meep know all the commands. Maybe try and work on these things and it could be a +1, but for now I'm a -1.

 

I'll try. Thanks!

 

-1 for reasons above. But keep trying! Work hard and shout lots! Good Luck

 

Thanks

 

-/+0 Reasons being

1. I do not see you in shout as often as I see other people who apply.
2. A little bit more activity maybe? ;p

and last, good luck mate.

 

Thanks!

 

Pros: Has been around for quite a while so should know most of the commands.

Cons: I don't see you in shout much but you are active both on forums and In-Game, I don't see you in Teamspeak either so you might want to be more active on teamspeak and Get more involved in the community.
-0
Sincerely, Orange_Ninja3

 

Thanks! I will try to get more involved with the community

 

-1

You're immature and spam a lot.

 

-1
I've never seen you help in shout, and also, I have certain players in the central time zone who look out for players shouting in chat for me. Also, the amount of apps made shows that your desperate. This time it is not enthusiasm

 

How am I immature? And I don't spam at all

Ok....

 

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IGN: Stone_Hawkeye
Skype Username: I have one but I want to keep it private unless I'm accepted for an interview (You must have Skype regardless if you'll be getting it in the future. It is very possible that this will lead to an auto deny.)
Teamspeak Username: Stone_Hawkeye
Mic Use: Yes I do have a mic
Age:13
Timezone: Central
Hours online per weekday: 2-4
Hours online per weekend: 4-12 each weekend day
Position Change: Elite to Helper

Introduction:
Merry Christmas everyone! I'm Stone_Hawkeye but most people call me Stone! I love to play sports such as Hockey, Cross Country, Track, and more! I have been playing Meepcraft sense (This one grammatical mistake is not good. If you ever wish to apply again, I suggest correcting it with "since") June of 2012 so I have been around for about a year and a half, I guess I'm considered and "oldie". I am applying because for a long time this has been my only and favorite sever to play on and hang out with the great community! (Whenever I'm reviewing applications, I always look for what stands out about the player. In this introduction, there is nothing positive that edges me to a +1)
Why I should be Helper?
I would be a great Helper for the following reasons. I have been playing Meepcraft for about a year and a half so I am very familiar with the commands and rules. I am very active on forums and in-game I am online for at least 2 hours every day. (Just because you play the server doesn't make you qualified for the Helper position.) I have gotten to know most of you by talking to you in-game or on the forums so I am very familiar with the community. (I sincerely doubt that half of the people on the server know you or have seen you in chat.) I am used to getting asked a lot of questions about commands and rules because I have owned many towns and have been assistant of a couple of towns. I am very mature for my age. I am a strait A-B student that always gets my homework done on time and does a lot of academic activities. I am always looking to help people, if its with their homework, if its in-game, or if its anywhere, then so be it, I will always try to help. As a staff member I would try to help get modreqs done faster because sometimes it takes a minute to a couple of hours to get a staff member to answer a modreq. I also would be helping a lot of people in the Towny world with commands and rules because that's what I specialize in. (This paragraph again doesn't bring anything positive about why you should be Helper. You're just stating a few of the many responsibilities a Helper has.)
Weaknesses:
I am not very active on Teamspeak, (Try applying for Helper when you are active. You are required to be active in the three community genres of Meepcraft that include Teamspeak, forums, and in game activity.) but I am trying to go on it more when I have the time. Also I am not very well-known in the community (In your introduction you stated that many of us know you. I am a little confused here.) so I am trying to /shout more and I'm trying to become as well-known in the community as I possibly can. At times I can be very stubborn but that's only because I am following my gut and doing what I think is right even though it might not be. (When handling mod requests or any other problems, you are required to thoroughly search the problem until you come up with a logical answer based off of the evidence.) Sometimes I may not be able to come on for the day due to Hockey practice and school homework.
Conclusion:
I think I would make a great staff member and I hope you do too! ("I hope you do too!" I'm very confused here.) There are some weakness that I need to work on but we all are humans and we all make mistakes. So when you see me in-game or on forums don't be afraid to ask me questions, I am always willing to help! Thanks for taking some time out of your day to read my staff application. I hope you like it! Sorry if it's a little short. Thanks! (There's not much to add on to this conclusion as it is what the typical player would say.)

-Stone_Hawkeye (Mr. Pebble)

Further comments:

It seems that you are inadequate for the position for the reasons mentioned above. When you are more active, I would like to see you apply again.

-1

 

Thanks

 

Hello Stone_Hawkeye,
After much discussion, we have decided to deny this application at this time. We performed this action because we thought that you needed to improve your activity in all aspects within the server, including /shout and teamspeak.

Please apply in 2 weeks.