It doesn't have to be nice, but you were openly rude. You seemed to make an extreme effort to make her feel terrible, I don't appreciate that. Of course being nice isn't in the rules, but most of your comments didn't help her in any way either. At least TRY and give constructive criticism.
~ @Mainkreke
I don't appreciate people lying on their apps. Thinking highly of yourself is lying in a way but I don't feel like arguing.
~ @Torchic
Please bring your arguments elsewhere; there is a rule that says only two posts per person per application. Mainkreke, thank you for trying to help, but from here on out, try not to respond to the criticism of othrrs and instead focus on making sure you help the applicant. Torchic, you are being very unconstructive. The point of being able to post on staff applications is to help the applicant improve themselves and to bring up any points about the person that the staff may have missed. Please refrain from openly insulting the applicant.
Athena; I think you have a lot of potential, but I think that if this is denied, you should work on a few things before reapplying in no less than two weeks.
- increase game activity and helpfulness. Use your current placr to help to the bebest of your ability.
- increase forums activitt and helpfulness. Post constructively on threads and be sure to contribute to the conversation.
- use the Tips post underneath the format to write a longer and more in-depth application. Also take a look under the 'Interview' section to see what the accepted applications look like.
All in all, don't be discouraged. You seem very eager and honest; if you work at it, you can surelt make Helper. I stand at a -1 for now, but work on the things I mentioned and you'll be Helper material in no time.