I think she means your movement. It's not exactly smooth, you 'jolt' forward little by little rather than one fluid and smooth movement. Great job though
~ @Deljikho
Ok yup I can work on that!
I agree with @Deljikho and @Zoe89 in that it was somewhat choppy, and could be much steadier.
Your intro is a bit basic, but that's alright -- maybe try something more unique? -- Overall, the syncing of the movements and the music match very well with each other.
Nice job for your first time.
~ @Hyori
Thank you, and yeah that kinda was a generic intro.
Maybe making it a bit smoother and moving more distance. Great Job Fase
~ @Bluapol
Will work on that. Yeah now that I look back on it, it is choppy, but thanks! :)