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8 hours a day? Seriously not even staff do that get help(Kling does, but he isn't human
~ @Marshy_88
Online 8 hours a day is easy,
@Muunkee does it all the time . . . by leaving the computer logged in overnight.
Now, on to the application itself.
Age
Honestly, you strike me as a far younger player, just due to the immaturity
@SpongeyStar mentioned.
TeamSpeak
I understand you are looking to download TS, but generally, it is a good idea to just have it downloaded before you ever apply.
How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekdays) min. 8 hours max. 10+
How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekends) min. 8 hours max 10+
~ @etha_lightflame
Firstly, I highly doubt you play eight hours
every day. When you are online, I rarely see you engaging with other players. Also, you're brand new to the forums, and don't have TS, which means you are missing 2 of the 3 forms of activity. Given, in-game is the most important, but the others are required as well.
Activity
Introduction:
"Oh hey I didn't see you there."
I am Ethan Lawrence Hookey although most people on this server will know me as etha_lightflame. I am sixteen and live with my family on a hobby farm with goats donkeys chickens and ducks. Although I have stated that at this time I do not have "Team Speak" I currently looking into downloading this program. I look forward to hearing from you.
~ @etha_lightflame
This area strikes me as incredibly weak. It's the classic case of, "I know a lot
about you, but I don't really
know you." Except for a few instances I've seen you in global, I never hear from you at all. Therefore, this section needs to tell me what goes on inside you. I don't need to know what your real name is, I need to know what goes on inside your mind; what personality you have.
The Why
Why should you be Helper?From the moment i joined this server, I have wanted to give back by providing player assistance to anyone needing help, as everyone on this server has been nice. I have had people on this server ask if I could help them, even though I am not yet a helper. I still try to do my best to help others/solve their problems. I have talked to staff and other people and I seem to be on track. I may be new to the Meep community but I believe I can help and would be asset to the Meep team.
~ @etha_lightflame
This is what helpers are supposed to do, but I certainly don't see you doing it. Perhaps this is just what I see, but get yourself out there more!
Weaknesses
What are your weaknesses?Kryptonite...but no seriously, I believe my weakness would be that sometimes I rush my thoughts but I have been working on that by thinking about how i want to respond before quickly responding. And am working at slowing down to edit my work.
~ @etha_lightflame
So your weakness could be considered reckless or impulsive? I'd say you have a few other weaknesses as well, which I will list below.
Summary
So, here are some things I would like to point out.
Application
Firstly, your application was very weak. When writing an application, consider these questions:
-Does my introduction tell someone who has never met me about who I am on the inside?
-Does this application use proper capitalization and punctuation?
-Does my "Why" convey why I should be accepted?
-Are my weaknesses truthful and accurate?
Read over your application, checking each section for the answer to each question if needed.
Things to Work On
In your application, you listed what could be summed up as impulsiveness as your weakness. Here's some more things I'd suggest working on
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Forums ActivityPretty self-explanatory, but become familiar with the way the forums works. Interact with the people you may not see in-game because of timezones!
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ImmaturityThis is the thing I feel is holding you back the most. Even if we love playing around, there's a time and a place. Maturity is knowing when that time is.
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ReputationThis sounds odd, but you need to have a reputation. When people think of you, what do they think of? Ironically, for me, the first thing I picture in my mind when someone mentions you is the baby duck you have mentioned many times. It may sound arrogant, but build a name for yourself! When people associate you with compassion, patience, and intelligent, you will have a much better chance.
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TeamSpeakI understand you plan to download this, but it is a concern to me you'd apply before you actually downloaded the program.
Overall, I think you have a lot of potential, but you're not ready yet. -1. Best of luck!