https://youtu.be/NN_lRJzVBjk
This was the first video, for anyone who doesn't want to do the links
I have a couple things to say about this video:
- It was made a long time ago, your skills could have changed since 2014.
- The music was not a very good choice to fit Meepcraft. I also suggest trying to sync the video with the audio. For example at a beat drop engage in an epic battle in KitPVP or something.
- You showed a lot of useless clips. There were so many parkour clips I thought it was a parkour trailer. You also showed a head shop which was kind of useless. Were you trying to advertise your heads to sell or something?
- Bad timing. A lot of the towny clips were shot at night time, and you didn't let the world render. One part that is very noteworthy is the part in Towns Alpha where you show a clip of a half-rendered pirate ship for like 15 seconds, and it's at night time. (maybe turn up your render distance and the fog)
- The texture pack/resource pack whatever it's called now. I think that it would generally be a better idea to use a simpler pack because it was a little bit all over the place, the one you used. If you don't like vanilla I suggest Sphax BureBDCraft or Faithful.
Overall for video 1: 4/10 - I haven't watched video 2 as I type but maybe it's better than this one.
https://youtu.be/F0oSw2AhjeQ
This is the second video.
- This was also made quite a while ago.
- Lots of useless clips again, you showed the statues for like 30 seconds. I suggest cutting clips a little bit more.
- The music was too fast-paced for the speed that the camera was going. There were lots of beat drops in this and nothing visual happened there, which I found really strange.
- Since you did not have access to /fly you could have gone up high to get some shots with some pretty shaders. If you don't think you can get high-up shots then I would focus more on gameplay like the parkour. Your camera movements were very weird, even though you call this a technique it just doesn't look right in my eyes.
- The ending was not very good, the whole jumping thing and the lowercase text. You could have given the text some color, too. The text at the end that said Made by Gedaviaman or something was kind of changing position, just weird really.
- Most of the points I made for video 1 also fits for video 2, which is why I'm not writing as much.
Overall for video 2: 3/10 - I didn't enjoy it very much.
https://youtu.be/Scb4hpnFxJQ
This was posted one month after the two Meep videos. Did you steal this? I feel like you couldn't have improved so much within a month. If you did make it, props to you. I'm not going to judge you for this one though, because I don't know if it's legit.
Overall, you need to improve on your camera movements, timing, choosing the right music and syncing the music with audio. I'm not going to judge you by maturity because I feel like other people are already doing. I don't need to know how mature you are to give you a -1, though. You have potential, but maybe I'd change my view if I saw some newer videos because I have no idea whether or not you have improved since 2014!
-1, but good luck.
