Helper Application from Adstar76

Adstar76

Member Name Adstar76 Additional In Game Names: Adstar76, Ismaxu, Jefftheduck How old are you? 13 Location: Australia Do you have TeamSpeak? Yes How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekdays) 3 hours How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekends) 4 hours Have you ever been staff on this or any other server? Yes References: Please give IGN's I don't remember the players name. I was staff on a server a long time ago then resigned. When did you join Meepcraft? Janurary 2015 I dont know if this is right. Introduction: Hi my name is Adam im 13 years old. I like playing minecraft and lots of other games. I am a nice and friendly person that will help everyone. I will never do anything wrong and I am very responsible. I play meep a lot and its my favourite server! Why should you be Helper? I should be helper because I am very kind, I will never disobey anyone, I am very respectful, I am a great person that can help everyone that needs help. I will be really active in game and on the forums. I am always active in game and on the forums. I love meep craft its my favourite server. I will help everyone in any game eg: halo towns and lots more. I will report to higher staff if other staff are abusing the powers. I will not abuse my powers as a staff member. I will respect staff below me and higher then me. I will always be looking out for any Mean users in game or on the forums and deal with them. I will always keep my out for people that need help. This is why I should ne helper thank you :) What are your weaknesses? When I go on holidays I wont have my computer there for I wont be able to play so I might not be on for like 2 weeks max. Please give any other information you might think is useful for us to know: I'm 13 turning 14 :)

adlovesdogs

Hey there! So I am going to be a -1 because your app should have more detail. Specifically weaknesses. I also think you should improve activity on forums and become a little more well-known. I think you have potential in the future.

-1, good luck!

Adstar76

Hey there! So I am going to be a -1 because your app should have more detail. Specifically weaknesses. I also think you should improve activity on forums and become a little more well-known. I think you have potential in the future.
-1, good luck!
~ @adlovesdogs

Thank you for the support I didn't really know what to put. I tried my hardest though :)

Nexu

Toostenheimer

I read through this application in under a minute. This was below average for a 13-year-old and looks very weak just from looking at it.

References: Please give IGN's I don't remember the players name. I was staff on a server a long time ago then resigned.
~ @Adstar76

The references are players who know you very well and can give you positive votes (possibly negative, haven't seen any though). It isn't asking for the player's name on the server you were staff on.

Introduction: Hi my name is Adam im 13 years old. I like playing minecraft and lots of other games. I am a nice and friendly person that will help everyone. I will never do anything wrong and I am very responsible. I play meep a lot and its my favourite server!
~ @Adstar76

The one thing that makes me frown at this is that you include:

I like playing minecraft
~ @Adstar76

And:

I play meep a lot and its my favourite server!
~ @Adstar76

Too cheesy. Put something else in other than "I love Meepcraft" or "It's my favorite server!". Tell us what your hobbies are, what grade you're in, etc.

Why should you be Helper? I should be helper because I am very kind, I will never disobey anyone, I am very respectful, I am a great person that can help everyone that needs help. I will be really active in game and on the forums. I am always active in game and on the forums. I love meep craft its my favourite server. I will help everyone in any game eg: halo towns and lots more. I will report to higher staff if other staff are abusing the powers. I will not abuse my powers as a staff member. I will respect staff below me and higher then me. I will always be looking out for any Mean users in game or on the forums and deal with them. I will always keep my out for people that need help. This is why I should ne helper thank you :)
~ @Adstar76

Again, you put the most overused phrases in your application, such as:

I should be helper because I am very kind, I will never disobey anyone, I am very respectful, I am a great person that can help everyone that needs help.
~ @Adstar76

I love meep craft its my favourite server. I will help everyone in any game eg: halo towns and lots more. I will report to higher staff if other staff are abusing the powers.
~ @Adstar76

And this made me cringe while reading:

I will not abuse my powers as a staff member.
~ @Adstar76

Don't ever put this in the middle of your application. Put it in the Extra Info section:

This is why I should ne helper thank you
~ @Adstar76

What are your weaknesses? When I go on holidays I wont have my computer there for I wont be able to play so I might not be on for like 2 weeks max.
~ @Adstar76

There's more than just this weakness. Include other weaknesses that you KNOW you have, like... Immaturity, Anger, Personal Issues, School, etc.
Overall, this application was weak and full of cliches. -1

Adstar76

I read through this application in under a minute. This was below average for a 13-year-old and looks very weak just from looking at it.
The references are players who know you very well and can give you positive votes (possibly negative, haven't seen any though). It isn't asking for the player's name on the server you were staff on.
The one thing that makes me frown at this is that you include:
And:
Too cheesy. Put something else in other than "I love Meepcraft" or "It's my favorite server!". Tell us what your hobbies are, what grade you're in, etc.
Again, you put the most overused phrases in your application, such as:
And this made me cringe while reading:
Don't ever put this in the middle of your application. Put it in the Extra Info section:
There's more than just this weakness. Include other weaknesses that you KNOW you have, like... Immaturity, Anger, Personal Issues, School, etc.
Overall, this application was weak and full of cliches. -1[/QUO
I read through this application in under a minute. This was below average for a 13-year-old and looks very weak just from looking at it.
The references are players who know you very well and can give you positive votes (possibly negative, haven't seen any though). It isn't asking for the player's name on the server you were staff on.
The one thing that makes me frown at this is that you include:
And:
Too cheesy. Put something else in other than "I love Meepcraft" or "It's my favorite server!". Tell us what your hobbies are, what grade you're in, etc.
Again, you put the most overused phrases in your application, such as:
And this made me cringe while reading:
Don't ever put this in the middle of your application. Put it in the Extra Info section:
There's more than just this weakness. Include other weaknesses that you KNOW you have, like... Immaturity, Anger, Personal Issues, School, etc.
Overall, this application was weak and full of cliches. -1
~ @Toostenheimer

Ok dude instead of criticising every single word I say mayby show a little kindness instead of being a little poo head
~ @Toostenheimer

Muunkee

I'm not gonna go through your app cause masteroftoast did it for me. Wewt. But I will say you should try and include more detail (it doesn't have to be 10 paragraphs long but it does need a bit more than you have).

Try working on your activity. You seem nice enough but activity and maturity are a must. Spend a good solid couple months working on those. You just now started being active. You need a bit more time I think.

You have more weaknesses than that. Be honest to us.

Overall not currently ready, try again in 2 months or so though with a more improved maturity and application.

junelawnchaired

Hey there, we believe you need to work on your activity, become more experienced with the server and become more acquainted with the community. This application is denied, please work on those things then re-apply no sooner than two weeks from today :)