On your previous application, you say that you're 13. On this one, you say you're 18. At least be honest about your age, heck I lied about my age and said that I was 14 when I was actually 11. No one's going to judge you by your age.
When you first joined the server, your previous application said:
But on this application, you said you joined:
Be honest. I don't like liars.
Introduction: Hey!I Would Like To Help This Server Grow And I would Like to Maintain Peace on this server.This Is the Worlds Best Server
~ @CrazyYoungBro
This server isn't always going to be the 'world's best server'. There's other servers that are close to that spot. Also, this isn't even an introduction. This is additional info to the Why section of your application, which is even MORE worse than the intro.
Why should you be Helper? Hey!I Would Like To Be A Helper On This Server Because I Want This Server To Grow And I would Like to Maintain Peace on this server
~ @CrazyYoungBro
This reason doesn't tell me that you should be a helper on the server. And, in all honesty, I don't think this is you typing. Your previous application had this average application that I honestly thought you did good on. But on this application, you got a capital letter for every word Because You Like To Type Like This Now.
This application was horrendous. This had similar sentence structure to two different applicants on the forums and was just as bad as theirs (won't mention who). Just from looking, you didn't put any effort into it. Read this in less than 30 seconds and already have a -1 on it.
If you plan on editing the application, that won't be a smart idea. Just warning you.
-1