That looks good, but you need to look at it from 2 views, professional and consumer, from a consumers point of view this is GREAT but from a professional view, the text would look more smooth you head turns would be smoother and the music would better fit meepcraft,
You may not have all the resources you need, I don't either but check out one of my meep cinematic and I made those WITHOUT media
Things I recommend
*Smoother gradient text
*Don't use text that is either R G or B but make it a mix so its less harsh on the eye
*A fast paced dubstep song doesn't fit meepcraft
*Smoother heads turns (may be lack of fps, in that case less heavy shaders pack)
*No focal point, you just moved around the server slowly turning, something like (view bottom of page) that could be good to learn from, it shows slow cinematic parts but during those there is text so the viewer doesn't get board then come the drop, there is action, bouncing to the beat, and big parts of spawn.
*Finally you still need to do a better job editing, mix songs color correction, etc
This by NO MEANS was meant to be mean but only helpful as you really do have potential but your just missing some things.
https://youtu.be/vzBvX36C2m8
