This application had no sense towards me as a read it. This was one of the shortest applications I have read, and this surprised me because an average 14-year-old could write a better application.
When did you join Meepcraft? 2 and a half years ago
~ @bloxoh
Either this is a lie or you visited the server for some time, then quit. I never saw your nametag because I was here in 2012 (I have a name-change at the moment).
Introduction: Hello, I am Eva. I am a female. I am currently 14 years old and I live in NJ, USA. My strengths are talking politely to others. I am an Elite donator.
~ @bloxoh
You constantly used "I am' for all but one sentence in your introduction. You never gave us any info about you. The only actual info you gave was that you're female, name is Eva, 14 years old, and you live in New Jersey. If you joined 2 1/2 years ago and actually stayed, you would've known how to write a better introduction than this.
Why should you be Helper? I am going for helper because I want to help the server grow and expand as they have done for me.
~ @bloxoh
This made no sense at all. I was confused on what you were saying because what you were saying (in my words) was:
"I'm going for helper because they helped me grow and expand, so I'll give back to them."
You didn't explain the 'grow and expand' part. Instead of typing one sentence explaining why you should be helper, actually get some friends to help you type it or come up with how this section should be typed. The 'Why?' section is the most important section of the whole application, so proof-read this part mainly next time.
What are your weaknesses? I would like to expand my knowledge of the meepcraft community.
~ @bloxoh
This isn't a weakness at all. This is what you would want in Meepcraft. You didn't fully explain or give any weaknesses to your knowledge, so the Staff Team won't know what issues you may have as a Staff member here.
Overall, this application was very, very weak and poorly made. Please work on any issues I stated in my post.
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