Helper Application from Marshmellow120

Marshmellow120

Member Name Marshmellow120 Additional In Game Names: Marshanater101 How old are you? 12 Location: Australia Do you have TeamSpeak? No How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekdays) 4 How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekends) 4 Have you ever been staff on this or any other server? No References: Please give IGN's When did you join Meepcraft? May the 15th 2015 Introduction: Hi I am Marshmellow120 but you can call me Marsh. This is my favorite server ever and I love helping people with redstone stuff and some commands Why should you be Helper? I recon I should be helper because I love helping people and I hate when I get in a deep pit and can't get out in ages so I want to help people get out of the pit or to build a bridge over it. What are your weaknesses? My weaknesses are complicated commands Please give any other information you might think is useful for us to know: I am very nice to people and I have a high tolerance to people that do the wrong thing and I am very patient.

SillySilver

Comments are on purple, things which are bad/wrong are on red.

Member Name Marshmellow120
Additional In Game Names: Marshanater101
How old are you? 12
Location: Australia
Do you have TeamSpeak? No
Teamspeak is needed if you want to be Staff member. Interview in done in TS, and you also communicate with community in there.
How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekdays) 4
How many hours per day do you play MeepCraft? (weekends) 4
Have you ever been staff on this or any other server? No
References: Please give IGN's
When did you join Meepcraft? May the 15th 2015
Introduction: Hi I am Marshmellow120 but you can call me Marsh. This is my favorite server ever and I love helping people with redstone stuff and some commands
Omg this was...not good. You need to tell us about your personality, hobbies and what you do in Meepcraft in general. This section is about you, not just two sentences of things which are obvious.
Why should you be Helper? I recon I should be helper because I love helping people and I hate when I get in a deep pit and can't get out in ages so I want to help people get out of the pit or to build a bridge over it.
Not a good reason. "I love helping" or "I want to help" are something people do not wanna see in Staff application. When you apply, people know you wanna help because you're applying. You need to tell us a real reasons why you wanna be a Helper, one long sentence isn't enough. Also you repeated same thing you said in Introduction.
What are your weaknesses? My weaknesses are complicated commands
Everyone else has problems with this. You need to look at yourself and think what are the problems that can be a problem in your work as Helper. Examples: Are you immature? Are you too shy to talk with unknown players in-game or TS? Or do you tend to be lazy and leave everything to others?
Please give any other information you might think is useful for us to know: I am very nice to people and I have a high tolerance to people that do the wrong thing and I am very patient.
~ @Marshmellow120

Yeah, overall this app was way too short. If you want good examples of what kind of application is good, look at the accepted applications. Also, I don't see you helping enough in global chat, and the fact how you help just in local chat doesn't prove that you're helpful and people don't know it. You need to take this seriously if you wanna be Helper, its not walk in the park, its serious business that affects to many players lives in Meepcraft. I am on -1 due these reasons.
And...you did advertise your app in-game which is a big no-no.
http://i.imgur.com/vpEO9Cu.png

Forest

Hello Marsh,
My vote is a -1 for now
Your application was very short I would like to know in more detail why you want to be helper also complicated commands are not really a weakness you need TeamSpeak to apply for helper and I have never seen you in game.
Good luck

Toostenheimer

This application was poorly written and barely had any details in it. An average 12 year old could've written something better than this.

What are your weaknesses? My weaknesses are complicated commands
~ @Marshmellow120

These are pet peeves, not weaknesses. Complicated commands aren't much of an issue unless you're a tech. Actual weaknesses could be immaturity, activity, etc.

Why should you be Helper? I recon I should be helper because I love helping people and I hate when I get in a deep pit and can't get out in ages so I want to help people get out of the pit or to build a bridge over it.
~ @Marshmellow120

In your why section, you made no sense at all on what you were trying to say. The basic idea was "I want to help people because I hate being in a deep pit and I want to help them get out of the pit or build a bridge over it". That made no sense, which weakens the application even more.

Introduction: Hi I am Marshmellow120 but you can call me Marsh. This is my favorite server ever and I love helping people with redstone stuff and some commands
~ @Marshmellow120

This intro was only Minecraft-related and nothing else. You didn't give us any personal info or some info about yourself, which could've strengthened the application.

Overall, -1. Please work on any issues I have stated.

EDIT: This is one of the most immature posts I've seen on applications so far.

Ok guys and girls I now have looked at ts and I am now apart of it and I have looked at denied applications and accepted ones I will now help other people in global ( and none-global ) so I will hopefully become helper but it may be a while till I get reputation helping others ins global so cya in meepcraft :).
~ @Marshmellow120

You don't just post "Hey, I'm gonna go get a better reputation in helping others, then I reapply". The next time you apply, people will again -1 you for that.

cooey

Teamspeak required, very short app, who are you? -1

Bluapol

Teamspeak is required, and the app was too short.

-1 :(

xXAdotXx

Hey marsh,
So I first I'd like to say it's awesome to see that you have taken interest in becoming a Helper. Although, your application was quite short, so we can't learn much about you. Take some more time to improve the application, because it is a very big part of the judging process. Take a look at some accepted and denied applications to get an idea of what we're looking for.
I also think that you should get more involved in the community. Community involvement is a huuuuge thing here, so I suggest that you take some interest in getting more involved in the forums, on TeamSpeak and in game. TeamSpeak is also a requirement for interviews.
Fellow community members have also given you some great advice on how to improve. Nonetheless, I wish you the best of luck! :)

iiTzJDL

If you want to be accepted for interview, how can you do it without teamspeak?

-1

ImNotBlonde

Hey there, you've already heard this.. But you will definitely need to take all this criticism and put some effort into your next app. Good luck! :)
-1

Marshmellow120

Thx for you impact guys I will take you advise guys and help more in global and look a other applications and see what ts is because I have no idea what is it but I will be on it. :)

Marshmellow120

Ok guys and girls I now have looked at ts and I am now apart of it and I have looked at denied applications and accepted ones I will now help other people in global ( and none-global ) so I will hopefully become helper but it may be a while till I get reputation helping others ins global so cya in meepcraft :).

Math_Pro

Ok guys and girls I now have looked at ts and I am now apart of it and I have looked at denied applications and accepted ones I will now help other people in global ( and none-global ) so I will hopefully become helper but it may be a while till I get reputation helping others ins global so cya in meepcraft :).
~ @Marshmellow120

You're not dedicated at all. It seems that you just want the player tag. You've should've done all those things before you applied. This is how I think of you:

You: Ok, what do I have to do to get helper
Random person: Do this and that
You: Ok. I did it now give me helper.

Is that^ what a helper does? No. You are EXTREMELY immature and nowhere near qualified for helper.
Your why was not specific at all and you don't need helper to help people.

I am very nice to people and I have a high tolerance to people that do the wrong thing and I am very patient.
~ @Marshmellow120

Is this a skill that not many people have? Not at all.

Improve on this first and apply later. You have a whole big chunk of things to work on.

I'm a -1. Good luck! :)

Miku

-1 For the following reasons.

- No idea who you are
- Teamspeak is Required/You're never on it.
- Your app was short, and didn't provide any decent information
- I never see you ingame/on global or talking to anyone.
- Forum activity is way below average.

I feel you need to get more known by the community, I cannot judge you on your maturity because I'm not sure how you act.
You joined about a month ago, sorry to say It does take more than a month to gain peoples trust and get well known in the community. Also, Teamspeak is required to be staff, download it and get on and chat with us sometime :) You have 12 posts and 5 likes on the forums, You need to become more forum active, trust me. You will be using the forums ALOT if you get staff. Your app was below average, next time provide us with info that helps us get to know you better, and more than "I want to help people" for your reasoning to wanting helper.
Your lack of experience doesnt bother me, Cause we all need to start somewhere right? Work on the things i've listed to you in this post.
If you are denied, come back and look at what I have said, work on them and re-apply in 1 to two months.

CreeperCristi

-1
Reasons above

ImNotBlonde

Hello!
From me it's a -1 for all the reasons stated above. But I would like for you to know that you seem like a nice person and I hope you don't take these comments too harshly. Sometimes feedback can be pretty rough, but don't take it personally. Everyone gets bad responses. :) good luck in your future endeavors!

Mixifye

Your app is very short and lacking detail, I don't see you in game or helping.
-1

Marshmellow120

Thx for the feedback guys and thx ImNotBlonde for the pep talk btw I dropped the laptop at my mums so for the mean time I can only play 3days every 2 weeks when im at my dads place :0

Jalapenos

Hi Marshmellow, this application is denied. We would like to see more effort put into your application, and for you to work on becoming mature.